hmm. your swipe is a contemporary designers take on swiss design. that will through you off right away. still, you did pull out some of the major components of type and geometric shapes. the first piece with the large blue s works as a composition, but i have no idea how s and h fit into the concept of you liking purple. the color also does not reflect your love of purple. the next two pieces in peach and green look great, though the black typography is heavy and the line work in the first piece is also heavy. they look great, but concept is supported by design. hmm. last piece dunno. seems confused. i can't pick out where you were going with that one. let's see how you do with the next assignment. xo g.
hmm. your swipe is a contemporary designers take on swiss design. that will through you off right away. still, you did pull out some of the major components of type and geometric shapes. the first piece with the large blue s works as a composition, but i have no idea how s and h fit into the concept of you liking purple. the color also does not reflect your love of purple. the next two pieces in peach and green look great, though the black typography is heavy and the line work in the first piece is also heavy. they look great, but concept is supported by design. hmm. last piece dunno. seems confused. i can't pick out where you were going with that one. let's see how you do with the next assignment. xo g.
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